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Muse Monger Gold Medal Meddler Posts: 2871 07/01/09 2:59 PM January 2009 Poem Of The Month Winner December 2008 Poet Of The Month	Tags : None visiting me… i have suffered under the mime his lips moving without sentiment, true heart hardened emotionless as hands moved, trapped in the universe of quiet drama blameless in raw expression a theatre of masquerade it was i who misbehaved yes, i am depraved contrived in a skin that does not fit in the space in which i live sometimes real sometimes not bubbles burst in intricate movements splattering their thirst on my lips we then travel in the relics of laughter those i've pasted to my heart chanting in a flavor unknown to many a myth that refuses to remain hidden i see beyond the mysterious of my manner shy is the persuasion that speaks in deliberate encoded messages few can read between my lines of ghostly flesh searching for a horizon they do not know but it's there in the hazel eyes of me:[an oracle] painted upon my heels in midnight affair blue dressed bare is the smell of fire measured fragrantly in seas of coconut crisply whispered to sailing sheets of music wrapped loosely, see through around my soul i breathe in like a tourist, visiting me… ~~~~~~~ "Poetry is the utterance of deep and heart-felt truth - the true poet is very near the oracle." ~ Edwin Hubbel Chapin ~ ©tk 6.30.2009 "He:[she] who writes in blood and aphorisms does not want to be read, he:[she] wants to be learned by heart." ~ Friedrich Nietzsche ~
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Muse Monger Gold Medal Meddler Posts: 2635 07/01/09 4:06 PM August 2009 Poet Of The Month August 2009 Poem Of The Month Winner	Tracy, if I keep reading your stuff...and I intend to....I'm going to have to go on oxygen. Your writing has a way of takng my breath away and leaving me breathless. You do it every time... Hugs
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Muse Monger Silver Medal Meddler Posts: 1101 07/01/09 5:02 PM September 2009 Poet Of The Month Pick of the Week 26th August, 2009	Tracy, you say it well, your word selection, the voice that always seems to come from a centered place within, all translate in your writing, which is excellent. That last line is fabulous. Peace, Vicki He giveth more grace when the burdens grow greater, He sendeth more strength when the labors increase; To added affliction he addeth his mercy, To multiplied trials, his multiplied peace. - Flint
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Muse Monger Gold Medal Meddler Posts: 2660 07/01/09 6:10 PM May 2009 Poet Of The Month	Such a breathtaking piece Tracy. If this is the product of your misbehaving we need to encourage a little more of it I was truly captivated by this, finding little catches in my breath with your wondrous word working. As always, such a delight to breathe in your poetic beauty! The Phoenix
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Muse Monger Silver Medal Meddler Posts: 1289 07/01/09 9:06 PM Pick of the Week 8th July, 2009	That last line is wonderful. What a 'travel' experience.
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Muse Monger Gold Medal Meddler Posts: 4619 07/01/09 9:09 PM Poem of the Month Winner March 2008 *"We Leave The Light On"*	bubbles burst in intricate movements splattering their thirst on my lips<<<<<< You give it up fearlessly without holding back and it works because I can feel that in the trip down the page. thanks, andy
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Muse Monger Silver Medal Meddler Posts: 1512 07/01/09 11:08 PM	i like what you like...nice one particualrly the last line...louis
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Muse Monger Bronze Medal Meddler Posts: 552 07/02/09 7:03 AM	A very sensual write which we have all enjoyed P
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Platinum Medal Meddler Posts: 16708 07/02/09 4:35 PM September 2009 Poem Of The Month Winner	~ Tracy, I absolutely love what you do, girlie girl this one feels personal, deeply emotive, passionate and in a way I see you seeing yourself through someone elses eyes, in that closing line just an interpretation, though this is undeniably beautiful in all its feeling Sash xx ~ Click Here to Visit Muse Mongers Motel ~
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Muse Monger Reserved Room Posts: 305 07/02/09 8:54 PM April 2009 Poet Of The Month	I scooted back and forth in my seat til the end froze me in an emotional type coma. Good stuff.
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Muse Monger Gold Medal Meddler Posts: 2871 07/03/09 1:49 PM January 2009 Poem Of The Month Winner December 2008 Poet Of The Month	you each are so good to me, thank you basically, this is me my life right now, as Vicki states "centered" but i exist in organized chaos, lol trying to find me in all the scattering remains not so easy, so maybe just visiting me for a while again, thank you all...XO "He:[she] who writes in blood and aphorisms does not want to be read, he:[she] wants to be learned by heart." ~ Friedrich Nietzsche ~
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Muse Monger Silver Medal Meddler Posts: 1864 07/03/09 3:25 PM June 2009 Poem Of The Month Winner May 2009 Poem Of The Month Winner	Tracy... visiting "you" reveals a very complex and fascinating lady. Never boring, my friend! Your writing is always an intricate work of art... Yeah, I'm a fan! claps
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