The whispering grew louder
seeping from walls
coldness touched the floor
as footsteps neared
stuck in limbo
limbs unmoving
cries bouncing into space
as life teetered on the edge
who will save me?
tall shadow bends over
glint of steel
struck deep........
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wow, maggie............this is intense............may i have a copy for my journal?.......take care, please.......
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Of course you can have a copy alexis
twould be an honour Thank you for reading Hugs
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Maggie a powerful short succint write love it
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- The Cocktail Lounge
- Short Stories Suite
- The Secret Garden
- The Muse Monger Museum
- Critique Cafe
- The Lecture Hall
- Muse Mongers Movie Theater
- The Melody Mansion
- Lily's Library
- The Chamber Rooms
- The Penthouse Hall Of Fame
- The Penthouse Suite
- The Dressing Room
- The Letting Fields
- The Barbed Wire Room
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- Member Storage Lockers
- Sasha's Poetry Collection
- Poetry by Andrew Spaschak
- Janel's Poetry Palace
- Jessica's Poetic Journey
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- Christine's Collection of Poetry
- Passions Den ~ Poetry by Nicole
- Ruthie's Grotto
- The Haven - Poetry, Photos & Art by Rich
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- A Collection of Poetry & Art by Desiree
- whisperings of the haunted
- Administration Office & Archives (Staff Only)
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