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Muse Monger Reserved Room Posts: 388 07/23/09 4:26 PM Pick of the Week 12th August, 2009	Tags : love, empty, bitter, kiss torn apart by a tainted kiss now i'm so bitter with you did you know that love could be like this that it was the loneliest of virtues? oh, i've questioned how you could deny our every dream forever the illusion of love rains from the sky while evoking our hearts to sever my tears may have been my only escape from all that emptiness if beauty dawns in the poems i shape then by my dead-eye we exist i'll dwell inside where i've aimed to hide from all that you have said and with both my hands completely tied i bear the thoughts you wanted dead whether you could tell me if you wonder about where we might have been if you hadn't dragged and driven us under beneath all your doubt within is the enigma trapped inside your heart while you long a passage to see and consigned to grave when we're apart is the way we were meant to be Last Edited By: shadowpoet 07/24/09 3:42 PM. Edited 17 times.
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Muse Monger Bronze Medal Meddler Posts: 548 07/23/09 4:36 PM Pick of the Week 23rd September, 2009	ain't it strange when nothing can tear into U more than a kiss, stolen from Ur lips. this is great my friend, I love it, speaks from my own heart Book 4 "He came out of nowhere, always a friend to the victim at the slaughter of innocence"
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Muse Monger Gold Medal Meddler Posts: 2646 07/23/09 4:40 PM August 2009 Poet Of The Month August 2009 Poem Of The Month Winner	Shadow, this drips with heartbreak and sadness...and a sense of longing for a change... Well done...with an excellent presentation... I can't get past the sadness...and it's strange, because I just posted a sad poem of my own, right on the heels of this one. bill
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Muse Monger Reserved Room Posts: 269 07/23/09 5:53 PM Pick of the Week 2nd September, 2009	i bear the thoughts you wanted dead whether you could tell me if you wonder about where we might have been if you hadn't dragged and driven us under beneath all your doubt within i sense the mystery trapped in your heart while you long a passage to see and consigned to grave when we're apart A journey to the Dead and a powerful invoking force of Understanding. There is much Wisdom in these words, powerful pen! Bravo.
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Muse Monger Gold Medal Meddler Posts: 2604 07/23/09 7:39 PM March 2009 Poet Of The Month March 2009 Poem Of The Month Winner March 2008 Poet Of The Month	The sadness and pain in this piece jumps into the readers heart. A powerful releasing!!! "Be still when you have nothing to say; when genuine passion moves you, say what you've got to say and say it hot." D. H. Lawrence Visit me at Evolving in Verse
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Muse Monger Bronze Medal Meddler Posts: 984 07/25/09 7:54 AM Pick of the Week 1st October, 2009	Shadow, an incredible rendering of the heart... Only that in you which is me can hear what I am saying...
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Muse Monger Gold Medal Meddler Posts: 2686 07/25/09 10:22 PM May 2009 Poet Of The Month	Heart's tears flow from this work my friend.
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Platinum Medal Meddler Posts: 9496 07/26/09 3:14 AM January 2009 Poet Of The Month	Heart tugging write Shadow my tears may have been my only escape from all that emptiness I know the feeling well beautifully presented HOW MUCH CAN I GET AWAY WITH AND STILL GO TO HEAVEN? © Maggie Cusick
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Muse Monger Gold Medal Meddler Posts: 3833 07/27/09 3:34 AM October 2009 Poem Of The Month Winner July 2009 Poet Of The Month Pick of the Week 15th July, 2009 October 2008 Poem Of The Month Winner April 2008 Poet Of The Month	if beauty dawns in the poems i shape then by my dead-eye we exist i'll dwell inside where i've aimed to hide from all that you have said and with both my hands completely tied i bear the thoughts you wanted dead utterly captivating superb poetry
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Muse Monger Silver Medal Meddler Posts: 1627 07/27/09 7:10 AM Pick of the Week 9th September, 2009 November 2008 Poet Of The Month	Whooooooa... I get the message this one is expressing... very heartfelt WELL DONE It's all about love Whispersuasions
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Muse Monger Bronze Medal Meddler Posts: 699 07/27/09 8:34 AM Pick of the Week 18th October, 2009	ineffably sad write but too close to the truth for comfort
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Muse Monger Reserved Room Posts: 388 07/27/09 8:50 AM Pick of the Week 12th August, 2009	mightydreamer wrote: ain't it strange when nothing can tear into U more than a kiss, stolen from Ur lips. this is great my friend, I love it, speaks from my own heart I thank you mightydreamer for your thoughts and response to this post. I very much appreciate your time. Shadow poet
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Muse Monger Reserved Room Posts: 388 07/27/09 8:53 AM Pick of the Week 12th August, 2009	Topper5779 wrote: Shadow, this drips with heartbreak and sadness...and a sense of longing for a change... Well done...with an excellent presentation... I can't get past the sadness...and it's strange, because I just posted a sad poem of my own, right on the heels of this one. bill I am glad that you made it for this one Topper. Your gracious for leaving such humbling comments. Thanks. Shadow Poet
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Muse Monger Reserved Room Posts: 388 07/27/09 8:56 AM Pick of the Week 12th August, 2009	losparadisboi wrote: A journey to the Dead and a powerful invoking force of Understanding. There is much Wisdom in these words, powerful pen! Bravo. Wow, thanks. It means a lot to me that you recognize this poem as you do. Shadow Poet
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Muse Monger Reserved Room Posts: 388 07/27/09 8:59 AM Pick of the Week 12th August, 2009	passionsdaughter wrote: The sadness and pain in this piece jumps into the readers heart. A powerful releasing!!! Hello passionsdaughter. I am thankful for your time and your comments. Hope to see you again smiles Shadow Poet
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Muse Monger Reserved Room Posts: 388 07/27/09 9:01 AM Pick of the Week 12th August, 2009	Pyper Rain wrote: Shadow, an incredible rendering of the heart... Thank you Pyper. Hope you'll return for more in the not so distant future. Shadow Poet
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Muse Monger Reserved Room Posts: 388 07/27/09 9:06 AM Pick of the Week 12th August, 2009	ThePhoenix61 wrote: Heart's tears flow from this work my friend. I'm glad that it granted that effect Phoenix. Thank you. Shadow Poet
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Muse Monger Reserved Room Posts: 388 07/27/09 9:09 AM Pick of the Week 12th August, 2009	cusick wrote: Heart tugging write Shadow my tears may have been my only escape from all that emptiness I know the feeling well beautifully presented Ah, cusick. You magnify my confidence with your response. I thank you. Shadow Poet
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Muse Monger Reserved Room Posts: 388 07/27/09 9:19 AM Pick of the Week 12th August, 2009	Samantha G K wrote: if beauty dawns in the poems i shape then by my dead-eye we exist i'll dwell inside where i've aimed to hide from all that you have said and with both my hands completely tied i bear the thoughts you wanted dead utterly captivating superb poetry Thank you Samantha. Your words are most encouraging. Shadow Poet
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Muse Monger Reserved Room Posts: 388 07/27/09 9:32 AM Pick of the Week 12th August, 2009	Whispersuasions wrote: Whooooooa... I get the message this one is expressing... very heartfelt WELL DONE Your acknowledgment brought me to feel enlivened with gratefulness. Thank you for that. Shadow Poet
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Muse Monger Reserved Room Posts: 388 07/27/09 9:36 AM Pick of the Week 12th August, 2009	poeticpiers wrote: ineffably sad write but too close to the truth for comfort Ah, sometimes truth in poetry may generate comfort in knowing you're not alone. Thank you for your response poet. Shadow Poet
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