chosen by Janel
What mode do I operate in?
For my blasé ordinaries, I do make
I now believe anyone can discover
When we allow any of these new
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November 8th 2009 ~ Read of the
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chosen by Janel
What mode do I operate in?
That's a pinnacle! Yet I gladly admit
to being a supremely common woman
average in size, shape, and origin.
Consider me, statistically,
as just a female born in the U.S.
And although I've also lived abroad,
doesn't mean I'm exceptional.
For my blasé ordinaries, I do make
one small claim to greatness;
the kind with no official listing.
Recently, I witnessed the most
incredible record-breaking events, ever.
I came in as number one in failures,
to consider some of the greatness
in my twenty-five years.
I now believe anyone can discover
great things somewhere least expected.
We may decide once and for all,
to take a stand, delve into the unfamiliar.
If so, consider this to be bravery,
since it's possible, what's found
could put a strain on credulity ---
bend status quo, physics and biology.
When we allow any of these new
and different places or situations
into our lives, we will know
a simple truth: We chase wild dreams
and long for what eludes us.
But some things within reach, can't be
recognized as the great joys they are,
if we won't consider them.
© AM/2009
It's all about love
Whispersuasions
Last Edited By: MysticWings575 11/08/09 12:58 AM.
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Suncleaver |
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Everywhere you go, we definitely 'feel you'.
There's much amazement, joy, and wonderment to be found in the forest of untrodden paths and secret places. Love to you, Ayana. |
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hauntedwhisperings |
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so many things/people in our lives we just wander by
if only we realized their value this is beautiful girlie, always well done i'll take an everyday dream as opposed to a wild one ...XO
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Topper5779 |
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Well then, all things considered...this is a damn fine piece of expression....I enjoyed the read. |
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Ravenne |
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Ayana, many times after reading you, I'm struck by the wisdom of your thoughts. This is another one of those. You shine a light beyond the frivolous, into a depth that touches always. Love this, sweetie!! |
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SultryMinx |
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Somehow there is comfort always in your words, and they always seem to touch me.
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passionsdaughter |
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This poems message is one to place both in ones mind and heart
This is wonderful Ayana!!!
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Jim AKA RapidFire |
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An amazingly astounding write Ayana, I can feel your every word and thought
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MysticWings575 |
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Love this Ayana, truly leaves me thinking. Wonderful message woven within your words.
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cusick |
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We may decide once and for all,
to take a stand, delve into the unfamiliar.
If so, consider this to be bravery,
How dull life would become if we didn't take a chance Ayana feel the life beat of your heart racing. So taken with this poem. |
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Samantha G K |
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When we allow any of these new
and different places or situations into our lives, we will know a simple truth: We chase wild dreams and long for what eludes us. But some things within reach, can't be recognized as the great joys they are, if we won't consider them. yeah! a joy to read you hugs |
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ruredernot32 |
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If so, consider this to be bravery,
since it's possible, what's found could put a strain on credulity --- bend status quo, physics and biology.<<<<<<<<<<<<<<br /> Profound lines! I have always felt like you have wisdom beyond your years. So nice to travel down the page with you again Ayana. thanks, andy |
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MysticWings575 |
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Congrats Ayana!
(These awesome sigs made by Rox aka LadyRaine) |
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cusick |
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Ayana Loved this one
DO NOR RESENT GROWING OLD MANY ARE DENIED THE PRIVILEGE © Maggie Cusack
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Feeling you my sista, I'm feeling ya. This was well done Ayana, said with truth and conviction that will only grow with your growing. Believe
me...there's more darling. Peace
CONGRATULATIONS XOXO He giveth more grace when the burdens grow greater, He sendeth more strength when the labors increase; To added affliction he addeth his
mercy, To multiplied trials, his multiplied peace. - Flint
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