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Muse Monger Reserved Room Posts: 417 04/22/08 5:38 PM	Tags : madness His eyes of hollow madness in trenches as they lay Brother on brother Stacked like bales of hay Every war and any war since time began The look of hollow madness in the eyes of the warrior man He follows the leaders law against his conscience bare Eyes of hollow madness conditioned not to care The horrors of war... never cease to become less All the sights and all the sounds in the eyes of hollow madness Last Edited By: Deb Benson 04/23/08 3:33 PM. Edited 1 time.
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casskc		#1	[url]	[-]
Muse Monger Reserved Room Posts: 434 04/22/08 6:51 PM	Deb, this leads me to thinking how history just keeps on repeating itself, over and over again like some kind of insanity. A truthful write and a very, very sad one for certain.
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Muse Monger Silver Medal Meddler Posts: 1228 04/22/08 6:57 PM December 2007 Poet Of The Month	i notice you repeated hollow madness four times Deb, i know you did that because that's what it is.. war, i don't understand it all.. snuffing out the lights in the eyes of those warriors.. they come home never the same, some say at least they come home.. i love the ink of compassion in your pen here.. ~Lily No, no, not gain. Travel to lose. That's what you need. ~Henri Michaux
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Muse Monger Gold Medal Meddler Posts: 4620 04/22/08 7:52 PM Poem of the Month Winner March 2008 *"We Leave The Light On"*	Perpetual Destruction ~ I'd hate to say destiny because I never give up but the question begs itself to asking. Profound write. thanks, andy It is better to sleep on things beforehand than lie awake about them afterwards. -Baltasar Gracian, philosopher and writer (1601-1658) Click Here To Visit My Website
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Muse Monger Bronze Medal Meddler Posts: 799 04/22/08 7:54 PM February 2008 Poem Of The Month Winner	End war now, end the madness! You portray it well Deb, too well. ((((Deb))))
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Platinum Medal Meddler Posts: 9496 04/23/08 3:34 AM January 2009 Poet Of The Month	Looking at the horrors of war from a different angle Deb. He follows the leaders law against his conscience bare This speaks volumes to me. HOW MUCH CAN I GET AWAY WITH AND STILL GO TO HEAVEN ? © MAGGIE CUSACK
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Deb Benson		#6	[url]	[-]
Muse Monger Reserved Room Posts: 417 04/23/08 7:17 AM	Thank you ..one and all....I can't remember who did the song War..anyway there was a line in it it that says War what is it good for?...ABSOLUTELY NOTHING... and another song..everybody wants to rule the world..and I say take care of yourself and your loved ones..drop that pebble in the water of love and watch what happens Deb
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Muse Monger Gold Medal Meddler Posts: 3662 04/23/08 7:33 AM Pick of the Week 23rd July, 2009 January 2008 Member Of The Month February 2008 Poet Of The Month August 2008 Poem Of The Month Winner	The horrors of war... never cease to become less All the sights and all the sounds in the eyes of hollow madness Many things in this life I will never understand. War is one of them. Wonderful write, Deb. My Website MySpace Page
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Platinum Medal Meddler Posts: 17105 04/23/08 2:45 PM September 2009 Poem Of The Month Winner	War what is it good for?...ABSOLUTELY NOTHING... ~ say it again! this one goes straight to the heart of this reader, dear Deb... a powerful refrain, throughout this piece, and a strong message... warm hugs Sash xx ~ Muse Mongers Motel ~
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Muse Monger Bronze Medal Meddler Posts: 801 04/23/08 3:06 PM April 2009 Poem Of The Month Winner	Deb We read of wars in history books, but it is only through writings like yours that we see the other side of war, the emotions of pain and fear. An excellent write, dear lady.
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Deb Benson	Hollow Madness	#10	[url]	[-]
Muse Monger Reserved Room Posts: 417 04/23/08 3:32 PM	Cass..thanks so much for the read..I'll never understand war..flower child that I am.. war has made alot of our men and women come home with part of their soul missing ...Gee I better stop or I'll be writing the longest of replies.. thanks Deb
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Muse Monger Gold Medal Meddler Posts: 2604 04/23/08 3:51 PM March 2009 Poet Of The Month March 2009 Poem Of The Month Winner March 2008 Poet Of The Month	He follows the leaders law against his conscience bare Eyes of hollow madness conditioned not to care (((Deb))) This hits deep....powerful and poignant write!~ Much respect precious lady! Nicole Memories, Dreams,Ashes; Birth of Passion ~"In your light I learn how to love. In your beauty, how to make poems. You dance inside my chest, where no one sees you."~ Rumi-Mevlana
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Deb Benson		#12	[url]	[-]
Muse Monger Reserved Room Posts: 417 04/23/08 5:29 PM	(((Nicole))) thanks so much...I do think there is power here sometimes I wish I could slap some sense into the leaders..but alas I am against violence... looking for recruits to do a little slapping LOL Deb
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