that sculpts our life
Guilt is the souls salvation
standing before the door of redemption
Knock
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Posts: 417 05/07/08 3:09 PM
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Guilt is a hammer and chisel
that sculpts our life Guilt is the souls salvation standing before the door of redemption Knock |
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FairEllen |
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Deb
This is a real thinker poem. Guilt is a monster that can destroy or redeem - very well stated in your poem.
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~ ohhh this is wonderful, dear Deb and I totally love that one word closing so very well said, sweet one... *warm hugs* Sash xx
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(((Deb))) This is a Powerful and sobering piece!
One to commit to memory! Hugs ![]() Memories, Dreams,Ashes; Birth of Passion ~"In your light I learn how to love. In your beauty, how to make poems. You dance inside my chest, where no one sees you."~ Rumi-Mevlana |
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Posts: 1433 05/07/08 10:42 PM
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my kind of pen! for me, as I age, I begin to realize it's a hammer and chisel I was never allowed to hold. loved this one Deb!
Mick
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A thought provoking write, Deb! Most enjoyed.
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Indeed!
Excellent ~ Rox
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Posts: 417 05/09/08 8:06 AM
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Thank you my friends...just some thoughts that come to me once in awhile that I like to share
Hugs to yoy all Deb |
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Posts: 860 05/10/08 5:42 AM
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Strong words, Deb. Enjoyed the piece.
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Posts: 417 05/10/08 8:05 AM
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arun...thanks so much...
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One to make us think Deb
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There would be long to discuss about this short one, Deb.
Much thought provoking lines. |
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Posts: 417 05/11/08 11:27 AM
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Metalcove..guilt is always a fascinating subject..
...not everyone feels guilt about the same things or in the same manner
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