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 Deb Benson |
Path of Life |
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Posts: 417 05/07/08 3:23 PM
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This path of life Worn thin by troubled steps Used for others satisfaction Shunned for being different A lamb to slaughter Wanting to fit in It isn't good To dwell on things To re-live those times Moments of life Swirl a never ending tale Moments of magic of truth... of evil Of sadness ...of joy Of betrayal...of love Braided together by life Unraveled by forgiveness |
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Posts: 17105 05/07/08 3:34 PM
September 2009
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Moments of magic ~ now that is beautiful wisdom, Deb.... life really is a tapestry of all those things and more your closing absolutely rocks!!! beautiful *warm hugs* Sash xx 
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Posts: 1294 05/07/08 3:36 PM
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Moments of magic Deb, Seems you and I have a lot in common... Your pen runs deep thoughout its entirety. Well Done... Huggs, Jo
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Posts: 417 05/07/08 5:15 PM
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Thank you Sash...life is certainly a tapestry when we stitch it together as we go....I think I have slipped a few stitches here and there...but kept enough to
hold it all together..
Hugs deb |
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Posts: 417 05/07/08 5:18 PM
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Jo thanks so much...I think we probably have walked the same paths in many ways...always a hand to hold when you want to take that walk.
Huggs Deb |
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Muse Monger
Gold Medal Meddler Posts: 2604 05/07/08 6:58 PM 
March 2009 Poet Of The Month
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Braided together by lifeForgiving frees the soul and breaks the ties that binds us~ I will truly remember these words Dear Lady! Powerful! Hugs  Memories, Dreams,Ashes; Birth of Passion ~"In your light I learn how to love. In your beauty, how to make poems. You dance inside my chest, where no one sees you."~ Rumi-Mevlana |
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Posts: 669 05/07/08 7:40 PM November 2009 Poem Of The Month Winner  Pick of the Week
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the only things that truly matter in this world is the compassion we show
one another, and the forgiveness we give, even to ourselves...its all about the love. Excellent piece, ~ Rox
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Muse Monger
Gold Medal Meddler Posts: 3662 05/07/08 10:56 PM Pick of the Week
January 2008
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Moments of magicSuch a heartfelt and soulful write, Deb. Those last two lines especially grab my heart. 
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Posts: 9496 05/08/08 4:05 AM
January 2009
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Moments of magic
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Posts: 207 05/08/08 8:44 AM
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Isn't it true that life isn't complete without all of those things.
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Posts: 801 05/09/08 7:16 AM
April 2009
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Deb
Beautifully woven words that blend into a lovely poetic tapestry. Indeed, life can be a rugged path, but always a learning experience, and we are all the wiser for having traveled it. Hopefully, we learn our lessons early on and unravel the thread of forgiveness. Beautiful poem.
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Posts: 417 05/09/08 8:09 AM
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Thank you friends...just words that wove themselves together with my experiences..so glad you all got something from this
I appreciate you all so much Deb |
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