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Muse Monger Reserved Room Posts: 417 05/16/08 1:35 PM	Tags : faces Tonight your face passes in front of me Your sweet smell Fills my senses Making me hunger For your taste and touch I can feel your hands Gentle in caress Soft mouth...quick fire One together Tonight your face passes in front of me Even tho' I am with another dbenson
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Darkerside of light.lostandlonelypoets		#1	[url]	[-]
Muse Monger Bronze Medal Meddler Posts: 752 05/16/08 1:41 PM	You get towards the end and it's like a train comming straight at you , enjoyd this one got the T shirt on this one great pen DSL
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Muse Monger Gold Medal Meddler Posts: 3833 05/16/08 5:58 PM October 2009 Poem Of The Month Winner July 2009 Poet Of The Month Pick of the Week 15th July, 2009 October 2008 Poem Of The Month Winner April 2008 Poet Of The Month	such a touching share Deb... I understand this beautiful it is indeed.... gulp always a pleasure (((((deb)))) Keep Shining! Sammie
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Muse Monger Silver Medal Meddler Posts: 1433 05/16/08 10:21 PM October 2009 Poet Of The Month	my my - this was good. been there. one that leaves an, "I know what you mean" smile on my face. Mick
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Muse Monger Reserved Room Posts: 383 05/17/08 1:22 AM	Deb ~ After reading this, I think your titling is great and you took me on a lovely journey right into a brick wall with that excellent ending. You definitely caught me offguard... Tonight your face passes in front of me Even tho' I am with another I absolutely love this, Deb. I think it's great when you prove to the reader that you are not so predictable. You get an A+ for that here. Hugs,
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Muse Monger Reserved Room Posts: 364 05/17/08 9:25 AM May 2008 Poem Of The Month Winner	Well Deb Benson you have written a piece perhaps from every ones life!!! Truly enjoy the way you spilled with ease!!! jd-
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Platinum Medal Meddler Posts: 17105 05/17/08 3:56 PM September 2009 Poem Of The Month Winner	~ so very touching, so very human and so beautifully expressed, dear Deb... loving your voice in this poem, hon.... gentle, almost innocent, yet not, if that makes sense Sash xx ~ Muse Mongers Motel ~
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Muse Monger Reserved Room Posts: 269 05/17/08 5:22 PM Pick of the Week 2nd September, 2009	this resonates with me - sweet, but sad, a great 'if only...'
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Muse Monger Reserved Room Posts: 372 05/18/08 3:24 AM	I echo everyone else Deb This is a wonderful poem...I love the twist at the end ...so easy to relate to ...Excellent!! Yesterday is history Tomorrow is a mystery Today is a gift thats why we call it The Present.
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Deb Benson		#9	[url]	[-]
Muse Monger Reserved Room Posts: 417 05/18/08 10:16 AM	Thank you all so very much..I know we all must have had similar experiences in life..maybe even a couple of times..LOL (naughty me)...the twist at the end is a true experience.. Deb
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Muse Monger Gold Medal Meddler Posts: 2604 05/19/08 10:50 AM March 2009 Poet Of The Month March 2009 Poem Of The Month Winner March 2008 Poet Of The Month	So tender and real...those images just appear without warning. Beautiful! Hugs Memories, Dreams,Ashes; Birth of Passion ~"In your light I learn how to love. In your beauty, how to make poems. You dance inside my chest, where no one sees you."~ Rumi-Mevlana
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Platinum Medal Meddler Posts: 9497 05/19/08 11:25 AM January 2009 Poet Of The Month	True love is hard to shake off Deb, surprising ending. HOW MUCH CAN I GET AWAY WITH AND STILL GO TO HEAVEN ? © MAGGIE CUSACK
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Muse Monger Posts: 174 05/19/08 11:34 AM	Oh wow, Deb! I felt this one!
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