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Vampire Hooker |
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Posts: 417 05/22/08 1:24 PM
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Night perfectly dark Shadows can not be seen Fantasy leathers like red painted skin Palest face...lips spill ruby She smiles Johns are all gone Red icicle fangs drip She licks her lips.... Uses her dinner napkin and calls it a night! written from a picture of a leather clad girl stilletto heels etc.. |
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Posts: 495 05/22/08 2:25 PM June 2008 Poem Of The Month Winner 
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Yeah Deb... my kinda girl this.... sweet!
Paul Copyright NoN-fistfullofwords 2008
My Anthology: Maggots and You is now available at: http://www.lulu.com/content/2677208 |
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Posts: 1737 05/22/08 5:53 PM
October 2008 Poet Of The Month 
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Excellent ekphrasis write, dear poetess!!
Yes, I feel I can see it!  |
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Posts: 17105 05/23/08 1:28 AM
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~ I just love diving into an image and writing what I come out with this poem reminded me of an image I have had for years it fits so well.....this is a wonderful poem, Deb.......lovin' it!!! 
Sash xx 
Last Edited By: Angel of Shadow 05/24/08 12:56 AM.
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Posts: 1433 05/24/08 1:11 PM
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stirs a pretty hot image in my head - too much testosterone I suppose - LOL. liked the imagery Deb!
Mick
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Posts: 207 05/24/08 3:51 PM
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I don't know about you but I don't want to be anybody's night cap......lol
Great job!  |
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Posts: 383 05/25/08 1:25 AM
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Heya Deb....
Love it! Great visuals! 
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Muse Monger
Gold Medal Meddler Posts: 4620 05/27/08 12:32 PM
Poem of the Month Winner March 2008 
"We Leave The Light On"
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Deb,
You did well painting your own picture of the scene here. It's still lingering as I type. Enjoyed the close as well. smiles, andy |
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Muse Monger
Gold Medal Meddler Posts: 3833 05/28/08 7:41 AM
October 2009 Poem Of The Month Winner 
July 2009 Poet Of The Month 
Pick of the Week 15th July, 2009 
October 2008 Poem Of The Month Winner 
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lips spill ruby
loving that line Deb huggas to you! Keep Shining! Sammie 
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Posts: 510 05/28/08 7:52 AM January 2008
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Pictures and images often inspire me to write also, Deb. It so spurs the imagination! You did a great job with this . . . and left the image to linger.
Wonderful!
xoxo Joanne |
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