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 Talitha Ruatha |
Red Fence awarded by andy |
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Posts: 876 02/10/08 7:51 AM 
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It's a delineation of green to gray stay off my side this is my grass
no matter the place
when the seas part as legs of some great divide we lose the bigger heart
voices bark at the moon in the seascape of dreams lost to an unwritten code
ethics it seems, lost
tossed back to the red of warnings, leaning over to touch what is forbidden
we sometimes forget it's not quite a picket fence but it still divides each portion
© TR
Last Edited By: MattNJake1 02/16/08 11:32 AM.
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Darkerside of light.lostandlonelypoets |
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Posts: 752 02/10/08 8:04 AM
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Some times it's so good to read a poem and not to think too hard but enjoy the pens thoughts and writing
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Muse Monger
Gold Medal Meddler Posts: 4620 02/10/08 11:57 AM
Poem of the Month Winner March 2008 
"We Leave The Light On"
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It is better to sleep on things beforehand
than lie awake about them afterwards. -Baltasar Gracian, philosopher and writer
(1601-1658)
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Posts: 799 02/10/08 12:05 PM February 2008 Poem Of The Month Winner
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Great to read this here,
certainly impacts all readers! ENJOYED! Awesome graphic and poem! Smiles! Bobby 
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Metalcove |
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Indeed, it's another border and a solid one.
Great input, Christine.
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Angel of Shadow |
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Posts: 17105 02/11/08 4:14 AM
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~ it's funny how humans feel the need to fence in, or fence out and the boarder lines are defended and protected at times to the death it's a scenario that can be seen in countries...and even streets a wonderful piece of poetry, Christine, and a cool pic...love it *hugs* Sash xx 
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Teagan De Danaan |
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Posts: 369 02/11/08 6:18 AM
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And speaking as an Aussie where we have the longest fence in the world, but that's to keep out dingoes
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Posts: 1965 02/11/08 1:00 PM
July 2008
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Hello Christine
Our collective conscious, it's heart, constantly split up and redefined a billion times, with different picket fences. A great insight into the uneccesary barriers we build in this man made world. Loved your voice here so much. Max |
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Muse Monger
Gold Medal Meddler Posts: 3662 02/11/08 3:03 PM Pick of the Week
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(((((((((CHRISTINE))))))))))))
I'm hearing you, sweet friend. Fences ... there are always fences. *deep sigh* Much enjoyed this, dear one. *HUGS* |
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DarkPhoenixFyre |
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Posts: 1735 02/12/08 11:09 AM
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This excellent piece puts me in mind of that famed anthem by the Five Man Electrical Band Signs:
"And the sign said anybody caught trespassing would be shot on sight So I jumped on the fence and yelled at the house, Hey! what gives you the right To put up a fence to keep me out or to keep mother nature in If God was here, he'd tell you to your face, man you're some kinda sinner" Excellent piece, dear friend!!  |
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Talitha Ruatha |
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Posts: 876 02/13/08 1:31 AM
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Darkerside of light wrote: And it is always so good just to have you read me, Mark. Thank you!
Always,
TR |
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Talitha Ruatha |
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Posts: 876 02/13/08 1:33 AM
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ruredernot32 wrote: No Andy, thank you for the inspiration.....and the kick in the pants! *grins & curtseys*
Always,
TR |
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Talitha Ruatha |
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Posts: 876 02/13/08 1:34 AM
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calderhawk wrote: Glad to have your eyes on me here, Bobby! Thank you!
Always,
TR |
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Talitha Ruatha |
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Posts: 876 02/13/08 1:35 AM
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Metalcove wrote: ((((((~Mir~))))) Thank you for your touch!!!
Always,
TR |
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Talitha Ruatha |
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Posts: 876 02/13/08 1:36 AM
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Angel of Shadow wrote: Yes, Sash, and sometimes in people's hearts.... Thank you for taking time to read me here!
Always,
TR |
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Talitha Ruatha |
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Posts: 876 02/13/08 1:37 AM
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Teagan De Danaan wrote: *GRINS* Now that is really cool! Thanks Teagan!
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TR |
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Talitha Ruatha |
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Posts: 876 02/13/08 1:38 AM
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MaxHardy wrote: (((((~Max~))))
I don't know how I knew it, but I knew you would sooooo understand. Thank you, thank you!
Always,
TR |
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Talitha Ruatha |
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Posts: 876 02/13/08 1:39 AM
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MattNJake1 wrote: ((((((Stephanie)))))) Them damned fences.... *HUGS*
Always,
TR |
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Posts: 1433 02/13/08 1:41 AM
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Very nice. Love the closing stanza.
Mick
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Talitha Ruatha |
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Posts: 876 02/13/08 1:41 AM
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DarkPhoenixFyre wrote: *Smiling* WE all forget... Thank you, my dear friend, for your touch here!
Always,
TR |
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Posts: 427 02/13/08 7:15 AM
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You cover so much in this short piece. Is it turf ? Mine ? Yours? Is it infringement on ones personal 'space'... (three feet for acquaintances, two for
friends and much, much less for lovers), or is the barrier more atuned to limiting liberties taken with M'lady? Wonderfully provocative.
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