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shadowpoet |
To Dance Beyond The Moon |
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ladyluna524.corpwolfpacpoetry |
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A beautiful yearning sentiment. A longing I often feel too.
Wonderfully written. Hugs and blessings Lisa
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Pyper Rain.poetrycafe2 |
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This is stunning in every way, from the image used to the words of longing to dance beyond the moon...
So good to read you, ~Beth |
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Topper5779 |
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An extremely wonderful presentation...both in site and sound. for I can hear the echo of your words...as you dance beyond the moon...
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Polonius |
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In your poem, To Dance Beyond the Moon, You convey a profound sense of loss, perhaps bereavement, supported by the moon metaphor to emphasise your
determination to redeem your lost happiness. Well constructed verse, with carefully measured lines and subtle rhyme. Kudos to you.
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draculaswoman |
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that *pull* is so strong..........and deep........a beautiful creation....thank you.....
alexis "To the last, I grapple with thee; from hell's heart, I stab at thee; for
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Ametistas |
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Beautifully soft and compelling.
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augustsky |
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shadowpoet, This held my thoughts..and lingers still,
a fine write, takes you inside the image..and inside the feelings. A fine read, Hugs Sky
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cusick |
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You write love and loss so beautifully Shadow
tis a long road to travel alone but hope your last line comes true
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PoeticRaine |
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I simply loved this~
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hauntedwhisperings |
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R ~ have read a few times now, this is beautiful absolutely feeling it at this point of my journey one day always sounds so sweet, despite the ache you captured it, as always, amazingly...XO
"He:[she] who writes in blood and aphorisms does not want to be
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he:[she] wants to be learned by heart." ~ Friedrich Nietzsche ~ |
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DarkPhoenixFyre |
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Truly excellent piece, dear poet!!
So very well presented, also!
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Angel of Shadow |
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~ my shadow friend, you romantic thang, you
this poem is hauntingly beautiful I love the image you've used, and the emotion within your words and that closing stanza is gorgeous!!!
Sash xx
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