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To Dance Beyond The Moon
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Posts: 794 07/10/09 6:33 PM
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A beautiful yearning sentiment. A longing I often feel too.
Wonderfully written. Hugs and blessings Lisa
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Posts: 981 07/10/09 6:37 PM
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This is stunning in every way, from the image used to the words of longing to dance beyond the moon...
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Gold Medal Meddler Posts: 2646 07/10/09 7:45 PM August 2009
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An extremely wonderful presentation...both in site and sound. for I can hear the echo of your words...as you dance beyond the moon...
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Posts: 279 07/10/09 10:13 PM |
In your poem, To Dance Beyond the Moon, You convey a profound sense of loss, perhaps bereavement, supported by the moon metaphor to emphasise your
determination to redeem your lost happiness. Well constructed verse, with carefully measured lines and subtle rhyme. Kudos to you.
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that *pull* is so strong..........and deep........a beautiful creation....thank you.....
alexis "To the last, I grapple with thee; from hell's heart, I stab at thee; for
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Posts: 1332 07/10/09 11:02 PM Pick of the Week 8th July, 2009
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Beautifully soft and compelling.
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Posts: 351 07/11/09 12:53 AM Pick of the Week
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shadowpoet, This held my thoughts..and lingers still,
a fine write, takes you inside the image..and inside the feelings. A fine read, Hugs Sky
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Posts: 9392 07/11/09 2:52 AM
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You write love and loss so beautifully Shadow
tis a long road to travel alone but hope your last line comes true
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Posts: 669 07/11/09 3:51 AM
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I simply loved this~
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Gold Medal Meddler Posts: 2923 07/11/09 9:08 AM
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R ~ have read a few times now, this is beautiful absolutely feeling it at this point of my journey one day always sounds so sweet, despite the ache you captured it, as always, amazingly...XO 
"He:[she] who writes in blood and aphorisms does not want to be
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Posts: 1731 07/11/09 10:22 AM
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Truly excellent piece, dear poet!!
So very well presented, also! 
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Posts: 16918 07/11/09 6:14 PM
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~ my shadow friend, you romantic thang, you 
this poem is hauntingly beautiful I love the image you've used, and the emotion within your words and that closing stanza is gorgeous!!! 
Sash xx 
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